She came all alone
To that solitary place
Where he used to sit
And looked at the village
Nestled against the mountainside.
She looked at him
He looked at her
They never shared words
But camaraderie herds.
The cerebral view
Did not exist
Born with a new feeling
Of an undecided and unheard mist.
They walked along the slippery sidewalks
And gazed at the river
Still no need for words
Where their hearts had become a mirror.
Away from the brutal land
That marks its scents of sabotage
Away from the monsters and culminate
A new feeling.
Before THEY took him
He only said
SHE IS NOT OF MY CASTE
SO SHE CAN’T BE WITH ME
DEATH CANNOT BE BESTOWED UPON HER
SHE IS NOT OF MY CASTE
SO SHE CAN’T DIE WITH ME
HEAVEN OR HELL
WE SHALL NOT BE TOGETHER.
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They walked along the slippery sidewalks
And gazed at the river
Still no need for words
Where their hearts had become a mirror.
loved the lines...
excellent work...shell....!!!!!
GOOD WORK.. \m/
honestly one of the most sorted structures i'v read recently.. this poem reminded me of a chapter we had in hindi.. ((jimey woh zameen nahi fatt jati hoti :p woh waala))
anyway.. awesome awesome awesome piece of literature :) and excellent use of words.. :)
keep up the good work.. :)
keep rocking \m/
@yash and niki-thanks!!i thot it ws rather kiddish!!!
naaa...shell...it's not.....
oyee tujhe ITTI WADDDI WALI POETESS acha bol rahi hai...
main to choti cheez hun...meri nahi t INHIN KI sun lo...!!!!
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